Sunday, July 04, 2010

Sublimation


I hear you stumble on the stair
Pocking the surface of my tune
I love you for your particular flair
For leaving the room too soon


"I don't quite know why I find this amusing... I just do."
-Pisces Iscariot 2010

7 comments:

jbkrost said...

I do also...
what's going on with the ax?

Yodood said...

I quite like it too. I'm amused at your self quoted appreciation almost as well.

Tom said...

quirks are funny..when they're not annoying--which they invariably are

zoe said...

a perfect little tune you have here! i like this post very much, the piece is the perfect shape, sound, rhythm, everything!

and the image is something as well--the man himself looks like a drooling idiot, i think, and yet he casts quite a monstrous shadow, which is usually the case with drooling idiots...

Harlequin said...

I like how the whole thing seems to hang together .... yet have no idea how this is being achieved.... ha!! you have done it again!!

Garth said...

Well I'm glad it's not just me then :D

jbkrost: Not sure whether its blood or drool on the axe.

Yodood: Yup, a moment of smokey revelation ;]

Tom: not as funny as quarks tho'

Zoe: the thing I like about his shadow is that represents him accurately; not the cliched nice man/nasty shadow, if you get what I mean

Harlequin: This was originally a serious six stanza poem - couldn't get it to work until these disconnected line came together and made me laugh (not often that I get to make myself laugh) :)

JeffScape said...

HAH!

Have I outstayed my welcome?

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