tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post3075241337911267890..comments2024-01-17T06:34:48.599+00:00Comments on The Far Queue: The Flickering LightGarthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-41045555551410214502009-01-05T18:17:00.000+00:002009-01-05T18:17:00.000+00:00You certainly have a wee with wyrds my good man. T...You certainly have a wee with wyrds my good man. This was an enjoyable, gentle, glide from start to fin.<BR/><BR/>My wife can't get to sleep without reading either. I wish that I had named one of my kids Canyon Echo..<BR/>dammit anyway!Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-7085110642134502642009-01-05T12:39:00.000+00:002009-01-05T12:39:00.000+00:00I met a lass who looked like that in Tiffany's...I met a lass who looked like that in Tiffany's in Exeter in 1987. Said she worked in C&A, but she was lying.Tim Fhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14681067872556519250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-50731467998961675352009-01-04T12:02:00.000+00:002009-01-04T12:02:00.000+00:00Which page did it turn out to be?Which page did it turn out to be?James Highamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14525082702330365464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-29918352407634488122009-01-03T01:47:00.000+00:002009-01-03T01:47:00.000+00:00I love it, perfect!I love it, perfect!William Kretschmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338853206337389818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-1448031672308968862009-01-02T22:29:00.000+00:002009-01-02T22:29:00.000+00:00candie, et une autre...pisces, no channeling meant...candie, et une autre...<BR/><BR/>pisces, no channeling meant lol! by automatic, i meant basic free writing without self-editing, at least not in the initial draft. xooxoxLaura Tattoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-66165454257642208852009-01-02T22:03:00.000+00:002009-01-02T22:03:00.000+00:00well if I had the words to explain the "much more"...well if I had the words to explain the "much more"...but don't need words to talk to a pisces.<BR/>Note from a pisces to another.<BR/>:)Candiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09820349874923006162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-2794424583631047172009-01-02T20:20:00.000+00:002009-01-02T20:20:00.000+00:00It's...amazing and much more.It's...amazing and much more.Candiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09820349874923006162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-45494431022402586272009-01-02T16:18:00.000+00:002009-01-02T16:18:00.000+00:00Moineau: I get what you mean but I wouldn’t say “a...Moineau: I get what you mean but I wouldn’t say “automatic” since this would hang some occult status onto what are essentially the workings of the unconscious mind.<BR/>There is normally some seed hanging around in my conscious mind – something I’ve seen or heard – and I generally start off with a line that sounds good and let it flow from there.<BR/>There is no absolute method or structure since I have no formal training in the construction of poems.<BR/>Line by line the poem needs to make sense and I try not to force rhymes unless they can still make sense.<BR/>It’s difficult to define and, since to define is often to destroy, I avoid looking too closely at the process.<BR/>This particular one was put together with a few beers and took about 45 minutes all in – it germinated from my disquiet about the whole ‘new year’ thing.<BR/><BR/>Dood: Markov theory (as I understand it) gives that any future prediction can only be based in the present - tomorrow may well give a different view ;)Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-44568430418458270212009-01-02T11:41:00.000+00:002009-01-02T11:41:00.000+00:00"Wraps a thought in filigree spores of all her fut..."Wraps a thought in filigree spores of all her future ghosts…" <BR/><BR/>What a a masterful capture of such a delicate rarity as awareness of the effect of the present upon who one will be in the future.Yodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-33614818891753978802009-01-02T10:53:00.000+00:002009-01-02T10:53:00.000+00:00hey, pisces. do you write fairly automatically? i ...hey, pisces. do you write fairly automatically? i just love your natural flow of meaning, mythology, metaphor, and description; the near rhyme, rhymes, and sense of line. this one has a strong finish in those last two <I>vers</I><BR/><BR/>i ask because i write automatically most of the time. it helps if i'm feeling immensely angry or passionate about something; then, it's unstoppable. since i developed a pain condition, though, my fingers make tons o' typos and i find i'm editing so much more than i used to, just sitting on something for days. my mind is rather addled by the drugs i take.<BR/><BR/>so, how long did this poem take you overall, not counting the precognisant stuff or even early thinking? from the time when the first words were inscribed to when you hit "publish"? just curious. xoox ~ltLaura Tattoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.com