tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post6133623094748633907..comments2024-01-17T06:34:48.599+00:00Comments on The Far Queue: Dancehall DazeGarthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-34152928822004463542011-06-30T07:30:23.158+01:002011-06-30T07:30:23.158+01:00Punch: or a scream
Lobe: you wuzPunch: or a scream<br /><br />Lobe: you wuzGarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-57785859324240521042011-06-29T17:00:51.829+01:002011-06-29T17:00:51.829+01:00I were here.I were here.Confessions of a Temporal Lobehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07363039533678460526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-23868006534995455662011-06-29T12:20:14.458+01:002011-06-29T12:20:14.458+01:00a pause for a whispera pause for a whisperPunchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17904275145636893257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-36876994773168855562011-06-25T09:09:46.238+01:002011-06-25T09:09:46.238+01:00Harlequin & pia: I sometimes think that if I d...Harlequin & pia: I sometimes think that if I don't compose these so-called poems into some sort of coherent shape then they are nothing more than sentences parading as poetry :/Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-875352879830375542011-06-24T15:48:58.133+01:002011-06-24T15:48:58.133+01:00I always love how you build a poem with the most p...I always love how you build a poem with the most perfect composition!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-10989808936512561292011-06-24T05:54:11.900+01:002011-06-24T05:54:11.900+01:00whisper, whisper, whisper; down, down, down...
...whisper, whisper, whisper; down, down, down... <br /> i like how you use the repeating motif, the rhythm and shape of this poem. <br />and how you put words together. <br />evocative.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-76583607657607777442011-06-23T20:32:42.314+01:002011-06-23T20:32:42.314+01:00Jayne: or between then and now :]
Lioness: thanks...Jayne: or between then and now :]<br /><br />Lioness: thanks for visiting :)Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-73114943272694452042011-06-23T09:38:09.522+01:002011-06-23T09:38:09.522+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-71674694183620783362011-06-23T01:00:06.508+01:002011-06-23T01:00:06.508+01:00This brings up illusions for me.
Things better lef...This brings up illusions for me.<br />Things better left unremembered and the chalk line between life and death.<br />-JHarnett-Hargrovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07486168670308150669noreply@blogger.com