tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post114620618045143919..comments2024-01-17T06:34:48.599+00:00Comments on The Far Queue: RitualsGarthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-1146595273534543822006-05-02T19:41:00.000+01:002006-05-02T19:41:00.000+01:00It's a novel... almost finished.It's a novel... almost finished.Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-1146568960361821282006-05-02T12:22:00.000+01:002006-05-02T12:22:00.000+01:00When she leaves with him, where exactly are they g...When she leaves with him, where exactly are they going? To the firing range? Perhaps, an all night pancake buffet or disco roller skating rink?<BR/><BR/>Pisces, I do love the imagery you paint with your words. I can actually envision the club scene where the action of the story takes place and have an idea of what the people involved look like despite you leaving out physical descriptions. Is Markov Chain a collection of short stories or will you bind all the excerpts posted here together to form one novel?elasticwaistbandladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12643871078268503643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-1146448401105824282006-05-01T02:53:00.000+01:002006-05-01T02:53:00.000+01:00Sometime not to leave and hve a cold hand gun thay...Sometime not to leave and hve a cold hand gun thay now make with plastic and light .She thinks all i ever was trust and loyalty never given to be tainted in a land of uncaring freedoms no familys so tired to bind so why not walk out side and hear it one last time.Would be so much better than watching all this corpotaty greed by peoeple with no ties to andone but a bank acount and control .You never know when you will be there next target .Death that comes fast is allways better than a slow beheading.littlebitofsonshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17683688523111570800noreply@blogger.com