tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post6771783359471468816..comments2024-01-17T06:34:48.599+00:00Comments on The Far Queue: Cabin Fevre ~ 8. The Square Root of ZeroGarthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-61197041654546268492011-01-15T08:10:53.149+00:002011-01-15T08:10:53.149+00:00Anon: be my guestAnon: be my guestGarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-78931094756861240622011-01-14T23:49:33.930+00:002011-01-14T23:49:33.930+00:00Ugh. I think I'm going to go drink some keros...Ugh. I think I'm going to go drink some kerosene now!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-84673946382928355912010-09-12T17:40:45.992+01:002010-09-12T17:40:45.992+01:00Not sure if this is an error: "She is suspend...Not sure if this is an error: "She is <i>suspended</i>(?) above this dead sea" - it works stylistically either way, but I figured I'd point it out just in case.<br /><br />Seriously, this story rocks. The aspects of horror intertwined with commentary are wonderful. Maybe I don't agree with Fevre's conclusions, but they're eloquently and enjoyable presented.<br /><br />Love the title, love the implied ominousness (is that a word) of the cabin number, love how the progression feels both smooth and staccato at the same time... not really much to openly criticize.<br /><br />Have you submitted this for publication?<br /><br />Feel free to reply via email. I don't typically come back to comments after I've left one. That stated, I'll probably check back here.<br /><br />Again, wonderful read. I'll hit the other "software" up in the near future.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-72432462209097648042009-07-02T21:43:26.116+01:002009-07-02T21:43:26.116+01:00Tom: this is, in fact one of the links in my novel...Tom: this is, in fact one of the links in my novel "Markov Chain" Another link I serialised as "Out of his Mind" - see sidebar<br /><br />Yodood: to have levitated your cognizance (logy or otherwise) is indeed an honour<br /><br />James: Ingrained ;)<br /><br />Harlequin: Thanks for your words - they will serve as encouragement to continue writingGarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-26951422224755143432009-07-02T19:18:34.474+01:002009-07-02T19:18:34.474+01:00PI-- posted yesterday but it did not make it!!
si...PI-- posted yesterday but it did not make it!! <br />sigh<br />I only wanted to echo Jimmy's sentiments; this is amazing work and the metamorphosis you have brought to life is remarkable. Gorgeous and courageous writing. <br /> perhaps you are indeed an ancient traveling incarnate within the now...Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-69931423325754437232009-07-02T13:48:08.919+01:002009-07-02T13:48:08.919+01:00Deep rooted?Deep rooted?James Highamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14525082702330365464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-2194768572421542072009-07-02T12:10:22.042+01:002009-07-02T12:10:22.042+01:00"for a time indecipherable to my meat mind&qu..."<i>for a time indecipherable to my meat mind</i>" your words levitated my logy cognizance beyond the grinding gears of carnal fears to comprehend the greenine process without end.<br /><br />May you never, as wellYodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-88590423107050302072009-07-01T23:24:06.221+01:002009-07-01T23:24:06.221+01:00Love the opening of this...great concept that coul...Love the opening of this...great concept that could probably lead to a longer piece of work. Neat-OTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-33856571153531498172009-07-01T20:43:51.294+01:002009-07-01T20:43:51.294+01:00Subby: thanks pal!
Mariana: you make a very good ...Subby: thanks pal!<br /><br />Mariana: you make a very good point: personal responsibility is the core from which all morality should stem<br /><br />Justin: I am happy to provide :) glad you enjoyed.<br /><br />Jimmy: the process of getting published is a disheartening one, especially since I have no illusions about best-sellerdom - which seems to be all the agents are interested in.Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-1290044065396240752009-07-01T18:52:04.119+01:002009-07-01T18:52:04.119+01:00What can I add to the 3 comments above me, other t...What can I add to the 3 comments above me, other than... find a publisher. No if's.. no but's.. find one.Barlinniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07555629852012324360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-51046137684137168782009-07-01T13:27:28.032+01:002009-07-01T13:27:28.032+01:00I do love your writing Pisces. It provides a tinge...I do love your writing Pisces. It provides a tinge of nostalgia for times when I was once young, and the power of prose could lift me bodily from the the mundane.<br /><br />Keep weaving those threads of iridescent thought stuff. I shall wrap myself up in the rainbow cloth of dreams you make.Justin R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17259500177754248182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-63763546957985680262009-07-01T12:45:45.903+01:002009-07-01T12:45:45.903+01:00You should have been born in the eighteen hundreds...You should have been born in the eighteen hundreds, I don t think you belong to the times we are in now.<br />I like the way you write because it is like from a classical writer but easier to understand to the one that does not speak old english at all.<br />Knowledge is huge, it can make disasters and marvels. But once you have it, you must consider yourself responsable. It is like freedom, its great to aquire it but then your in charge of the life you live, and responsable for your actions.Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23064466.post-88565005988393186102009-07-01T10:09:41.272+01:002009-07-01T10:09:41.272+01:00Bravo ending! And most engaging picture, above. go...Bravo ending! And most engaging picture, above. goes well with this, it does :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com