Eden ~ Kris Kuksi
Garland your sky with florid visions
Stations of the double-cross
Raise your hem show the incisions
Stitched with the hair of a horse
Spread your arms you junkshop Jesus
Crucified post-pixel priest
Declare your aphorism-cobbled thesis
The glory of a short-term lease
On hemstitched heels misunderstood
Your winged words ascend
Notching grooves on wooden heads
With nails not made to mend
Stations of the double-cross
Raise your hem show the incisions
Stitched with the hair of a horse
Spread your arms you junkshop Jesus
Crucified post-pixel priest
Declare your aphorism-cobbled thesis
The glory of a short-term lease
On hemstitched heels misunderstood
Your winged words ascend
Notching grooves on wooden heads
With nails not made to mend
5 comments:
I love it! There is so much harmony in your shorter poems in terms of structure.
lush and yummy like eden itself.
I have fell in love with your poetry. So unique in word choice. I love the middle verse - really striking.
-Nicolette
aphorism cobbled thesis.... how good is that !!
loved this.... the recovering catholic in me is experiencing deep joy
the appreciative reader in me is experiencing.... deep (er) joy.
:)
Zaina: I must say, I am struggling with structure at the moment :)
Gerry: yummy? now theres an interesting way of looking at it :D
Nicolette: Thank you, hope you will continue to visit
Harelequin: a recovering catholic? Is a catholic who becomes an atheist a 'catholic atheist'? ;]
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